Juggling Multiple Points of View + FREE BEAT SHEET OFFER!

Today we’re talking about heroes…plural. What do you do when you have multiple points of view in your novel and need to juggle multiple beat sheets (and character arcs!)

Plus, scroll down to find out how you can nab my most in-depth, robust Beat Sheet analysis yet (with multiple POVs, page-count info-graphic and more!) for FREE! 

Here’s another question I get a lot from writers:

If I have multiple POV-characters, do I need multiple beat sheets?

 

The short answer is: yes!

But let’s take a look at that answer in my more detail.

The “beat sheet” is, of course, referring to the Save the Cat! plotting method that I teach in Save the Cat! Writes a Novel and my online course, Write a Bestselling Novel in 15 Steps.

When you’re dealing with a novel that has multiple point-of-view characters, a simple rule of thumb would be:

If they’re worthy of a point of view, they’re worthy of a beat sheet.

 

In other words, for every POV character in your story (assuming they have a point of view that continues throughout the entire story, and is not just sprinkled in sporadically as a plot device), you should track that character’s transformative arc with a beat sheet. Because what the Save the Cat! Beat Sheet really is, is a road map for change. It guides us through the character’s journey toward thematic growth. And that thematic growth is why we CARE about who’s telling us the story.

So therefore, for every character you want your reader to care about or be invested in (this includes antagonists!), they should have a trackable arc toward some type of change.

So, does that mean that every character has ALL 15 beats of the beat sheet? Even beats like Theme Stated, B Story, and All is Lost (Another question I hear a lot).

And the short answer to that is also…YES!

HOWEVER, characters can (and often do) share beats. For instance, two characters can be each other’s B Story. And two characters can experience their All is Lost  at the same time (perhaps with the same “whiff of death”.) And I would imagine that if your characters are interacting with each other, they will appear in a lot of each other’s beats, particularly the longer ones like Fun & Games and Bad Guys Close In.

OR…you can have multiple POV characters who have their own unique set of 15 beats. This is what my co-author, Joanne Rendell, and I did in our YA sci-fi/fantasy, Sky Without Stars (the first in the System Divine trilogy.) In this sci-fi re-imagining of Les Misérables, we have three POV characters who all have their own distinct 15 beats. AND, because it’s a revolution story during which the planet of Laterre is spiraling toward civil war, we also crafted what we called the “world beat sheet,” which tracks the political transformation of the planet (as if it were its own character), complete with its very own Theme Stated beat!

Scroll down to find out how you can get a free copy of this epic four-POV beat sheet!

 

But it’s also important to remember that the beats of multiple characters don’t have to come at the same time, nor be the same length. In Sky Without Stars, our third POV character, Alouette, doesn’t enter the story until page 83, which means while she’s having her Opening Image and Set Up, the other two characters, Chatine and Marcellus, are already well into their Debate beats. And because Alouette’s story starts so late, her beats are much more compressed. For example, Alouette’s Opening Image and Set Up beat are combined and only take up 9 pages, while Chatine’s Set Up is 27 pages and Marcellus’s is 14 pages. In fact, most of Chatine’s beats are longer than the other character’s, because she’s what I like to call the “one true hero” of the book.

I always recommend, regardless of how many POVs you have, that you choose a “one true hero” for your plot. This is the character who changes the most and who will serve as the reader’s primary “guide” through the world of your story. For this reason, they are also usually the character we meet first, and naturally, they will get the most page-time (and beat-time!) in your story.

For the System Divine trilogy, because we have three books and three main characters, we chose to have each character be the “one true hero” for each of the books. In Sky Without Stars, it’s Chatine. If you read the beat sheet (or the book), you’ll see how she definitely has the biggest arc and the most pages devoted to that arc. She’s also the character you meet first. But for book 2, Between Burning Worlds, the “one true hero” is Marcellus. Although the other two characters continue to change and grow, this is more his story. He has the biggest reveals, the biggest decisions to make, and the biggest emotional transformation. We also start the story with his POV. And now, as we gear up to write book 3 (title to be released!), we are focusing the majority of our beat sheet efforts on Alouette, putting her and her transformative journey front and center in the story, while still making sure that the other characters are continuing to arc as well.

So, yeah, no one said writing a multiple-POV, multiple-book series was easy!

But hopefully, in reading the beat sheet I’m offering below, you’ll see how we were able to interweave the three character arcs with the arc of the world they live in, all while setting it up for a sequel (i.e. wrapping up the conflicts and threads of this story, yet still leaving more over-arching conflicts and threads open for the future installments.)

I hope this post (and the beat sheet!) help!

 


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This is not just a beat sheet though. This is an in-depth, multi-character plot analysis to help you study the techniques of crafting multiple-POV beat sheets and setting up first book in a series.

The 50+ page break-down comes with:

  • An Integrated beat sheet showing how the three character beat sheets and “world beat sheet” intertwine
  • Individual character beat sheets (each with their own Five-Point Finale!) for isolating one character arc at a time and studying it on its own (also includes “Cat’s Eye View” overviews for each character)
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  • An analysis of how the first book sets up the rest of the series

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  1. Your information on handling multiple POV’s is interesting. Gwen Hayes wrote a book “Romancing the Beat” in which she shows how to use two POVs when writing a romance novel. Have you read this book?


    • Hi Bill! Thanks for commenting. I have heard of Romancing the Beat but have not read it. I’d be interested to hear how our methods compare! 🙂

  2. Robin Mitzelos


    I ordered your hard back book before the deadline but just found out recently that there was a card problem. I reordered it but it was after the deadline. I did send you a receipt.from the original order date that was before your deadline. Csn inplease still get the free gift of the beat sheets please!!!!!

  3. Elizabeth Gibson


    Hi Jessica, I ordered your new book and received it today. I have not received the free gift of the beat sheets. So looking forward to reading “Sky without Stars” and the beat sheets.

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